tpo19

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tpo19

Both author and lecturer offer two opposing views on the side-effect of buzzing. While the reading passage lists some points as the negative influents of buzzing; the buzzer counters this specific points and presents some clues to call into the question for the information in the text.

First of all, the article mentions to the money paid by the company to buzzers as a motivation factor to mislead the consumers. However, the buzzer refutes this fact. As he states, he gains money from this way, but it does not affect his praise. Moreover, the buzzing is not identical to the other types of advertisement. The buzzer praises the product; inasmuch as he is satisfied with it. For instance, since he likes his cellphone, he advertises it as a buzzer.

Next, meanwhile, the reading passage nominates the lack of critical outlooks toward buzzers, since they are private individuals, as one of the negative effects of the buzzing; the lecturer casts doubt on the accuracy of this claim. As he asserts, the consumers do not believe them as easy as the article mentions. Indeed, they ask a list of question about the price of the product, its service, and its efficiency. If the buzzer cannot provide the adequate information for them, the company will lose its consumers.

Finally, the text uses the surmise of the missing sense of trustfulness among the people and it hurts their relationships; as a result of misleading data provided by buzzers. In the contrary, the buzzer rebuts this surmise. Based on his assertion, this type of advertising will lead to the cogent relationships among the people. Since the buzzers advertise a specific product for the sake of their own impartial experience; consequently, as the people consume that product, they will experience the same attitude, and it will cause the people to be open to people and more trustful.

All in all, that how the buzzer challenges whole information mentioned in the article.

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Average: 8.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[14]
Message: Did you mean 'side effect' (=adverse effect, unintended consequence)? Open compounds are not hyphenated.
Suggestion: side effect
...ecturer offer two opposing views on the side-effect of buzzing. While the reading passage l...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'so', 'while', 'for instance', 'as a result', 'first of all']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.253369272237 0.261695866417 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.10781671159 0.158904122519 68% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0566037735849 0.0723426182421 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0323450134771 0.0435111971325 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0646900269542 0.0277247811725 233% => OK
Prepositions: 0.137466307278 0.128828473217 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0215633423181 0.0370669169778 58% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75209398491 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0215633423181 0.0208969081088 103% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.161725067385 0.128158765124 126% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0134770889488 0.0158828679856 85% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00539083557951 0.0114777025283 47% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1951.0 1645.83664459 119% => OK
No of words: 325.0 271.125827815 120% => OK
Chars per words: 6.00307692308 6.08160592843 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.04852973271 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.36 0.374372842146 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.295384615385 0.287516216867 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.212307692308 0.187439937562 113% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.113846153846 0.113142543107 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75209398491 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 145.348785872 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544615384615 0.539623497131 101% => OK
Word variations: 57.8939333538 53.8517498576 108% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0529801325 130% => OK
Sentence length: 19.1176470588 21.7502111507 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9324891958 49.3711431718 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.764705882 132.220823453 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 21.7502111507 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.764705882353 0.878197800319 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.39072847682 29% => OK
Readability: 48.6561085973 50.5018328374 96% => OK
Elegance: 2.01315789474 1.90840788429 105% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.524843045953 0.549887131256 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.127512349875 0.142949733639 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0688049709939 0.0787303798458 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.625510358527 0.631733273073 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.173524338945 0.139662658121 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.23652394705 0.266732575781 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0986003792271 0.103435571967 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.441352060559 0.414875509568 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.127203137544 0.0530846634433 240% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.351087068851 0.40443939384 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878246079557 0.0528353158467 166% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.26048565121 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.49668874172 143% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.62251655629 110% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.1766004415 63% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.2958057395 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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