TPO24 INTEGRATED
While the reading passage states that, with broking Tyrannosaurus rex in fossil the animals, researchers can see materials that seem to be remains of blood vessels, red blood cells, and collagen matrix. However, the professor in the lecture rejects points that made in the reading, and he gives some reasons.
First, considering the reading passage, some evidence inside the leg bone reveal the presence of a soft and flexible organic substance. In contrast, the professor in the lecture, refuses this idea, and further explains that, some bacterias live whole bones, so materials will leave by bacterias, so we can not say materials inside the leng bone will reamin.
Second, the reading passage claims that, in some places with iron-a material vital to the role of red blood cells. In contrary, the professor in the lecture rejects this information, and made points that, in some fussils in places with iron-a do not have reveal to have a red blood cell, so we can not say iron-a can be responsible to exist red blood cells.
Third, the author in the article, puts follow that, scientists can find collagen inside the dinasaur leg bone. On the other hand, the professor in the lecture explains that, after 70 milion years, they can never finde collagen because they can not frem tibax. they can find in humman skin.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 256, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'revealed'.
Suggestion: revealed
...ssils in places with iron-a do not have reveal to have a red blood cell, so we can not...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 261, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...llagen because they can not frem tibax. they can find in humman skin.
^^^^
Line 9, column 291, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...em tibax. they can find in humman skin.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, second, so, third, while, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.4613686534 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 1373.03311258 80% => OK
No of words: 223.0 270.72406181 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95067264574 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38326358247 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 145.348785872 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520179372197 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 419.366225166 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 2.5761589404 311% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0563142392 49.2860985944 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.666666667 110.228320801 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7777777778 21.698381199 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06452816374 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302260752391 0.272083759551 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134264719425 0.0996497079465 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978850164725 0.0662205650399 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19002642472 0.162205337803 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630501680415 0.0443174109184 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.3589403974 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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