TPO22-teachers should not make their political and social point of views known to students
since teachers have a big influence in students life, they have to be care full about their behavior and some own views because it can give a sake to behavior's or minds' students.
I firmly assest this statement, and explain my reasons in the below.
First, students respect teachers, and actually, they believe them, so they accept everything that teachers mention in their classroom. every one has freedom to think and have own views, but because of influnce's teacher on students, they don not have to talk about their own points. For instance, if you have a policy teacher, and if he or she has a negative point about your government and rulls, after a while you will accept her or his opinion and follow them, so maybe it does not have a good result for you. As I remember, when I was a high school student, I had a teacher, in my opinion he was too knowledge, so I believe his opinion, and I ask him about everything, but after a while I found that, my behavior and aspects had been changing since I saw him, it did not get a good result because of some political problems in my mother country which I can not mention here.
Second, teachers have to focuse on subjects which they want to teach, and they must pay attention to students, and try to help them to improve, so I think if teachers trend to talk about social or political views, they will take the time of class. Also, students can not learn their subjects veery well, and can not get a high mark in their exam. one day, in high school, one of my teachers started to give some advices to us. Unfortunately, it was about her personal experience, so it did not work. In addition, I remember that day we had a problem in our subjects, and we wanted to solve it, but she talked for two hours, and we could not to ask.
All in all, every person has a special view, and every person wants to get a own experience, so talking about own social or political views do not work, specially for students in the classroom.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, may, second, so, well, while, as to, for instance, i think, in addition, talking about, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38315217391 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41022498685 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486413043478 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 13.0 1.86738351254 696% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.3081211861 48.9658058833 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.416666667 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6666666667 20.6045352989 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 5.45110844103 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18940647784 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707344692036 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051557930703 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105156774641 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531289195306 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.72 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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