TPO29(integrated)
The main idea of the reading and lecture is both about the migrations of dinosaurs. The author of the reading feels that dinosaurs migrated from north to south and gives three reason for support that. The lecturer, on the other hand, utterly challenges the claims made by the author. He is of opinion that the hypothesis in not convincing and present reason to that claims.
To begin with, the author argues that we can conclude from their diet that dinosaurs migrated to south from North Slope. Because they eat some special kind of plant that grow only in temperate zones. This specific argument is challenged by the lecture .He claims that they didn't have to migrate for finding food. Because the North Slope climate was warmer than today. Even there was sun in the sly for 24 hour in peak of summer, so condition for growing plants was suitable. Also in winter, in harsh cold climate, they could eat dead plant due to they were full of nutrients.
Secondly, the writer suggest that dinosaurs were living in herd and alongside herd, they also were migrating. The lecturer, however, rebuts this by mentioning that living in herd, didn't mean they were migrating .Also he mention that, some animals live in herds for being safe from predators. For example, elk live in among herds and don’t migrate with the herd, He is here just for surviving from predators.
Finally, the author states that to make such a journey, dinosaurs had to migrate very long distant. In contrast, the lecturer's position is that dinosaurs can migrate this distant, but the juveniles are not capable to do that. They are so slow, and they reduce the herd's speed, so adult dinosaurs can't live the juveniles behind themselves.as a result, this hypothesis isn't true.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 202, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd gives three reason for support that. The lecturer, on the other hand, utterly ch...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...urs migrated to south from North Slope. Because they eat some special kind of plant tha...
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Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ic argument is challenged by the lecture .He claims that they didnt have to migrat...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: He
... argument is challenged by the lecture .He claims that they didnt have to migrate ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ged by the lecture .He claims that they didnt have to migrate for finding food. Becau...
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Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...didnt have to migrate for finding food. Because the North Slope climate was warmer than...
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Line 3, column 406, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
...y. Even there was sun in the sly for 24 hour in peak of summer, so condition for gro...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...this by mentioning that living in herd, didnt mean they were migrating .Also he menti...
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Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... in herd, didnt mean they were migrating .Also he mention that, some animals live ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...n herd, didnt mean they were migrating .Also he mention that, some animals live in h...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...n herd, didnt mean they were migrating .Also he mention that, some animals live in h...
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Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'mentions'.
Suggestion: mentions
...didnt mean they were migrating .Also he mention that, some animals live in herds for be...
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Line 7, column 297, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...uce the herds speed, so adult dinosaurs cant live the juveniles behind themselves.as...
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Line 7, column 368, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...themselves.as a result, this hypothesis isnt true.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in contrast, kind of, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 30.3222958057 139% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1373.03311258 106% => OK
No of words: 299.0 270.72406181 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86287625418 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34599591361 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 145.348785872 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548494983278 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 419.366225166 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0069361317 49.2860985944 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.875 110.228320801 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 7.06452816374 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29310655084 0.272083759551 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100948505931 0.0996497079465 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560432242973 0.0662205650399 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173903691443 0.162205337803 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357486033116 0.0443174109184 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.3589403974 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.8541721854 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.0289183223 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.