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The main idea of the reading and the lecture is both about reducing amount of the salt from lakes.The author of the reading feels that there are several ways to reverse the condition to clear salt from water.The lecturer,on the other hand,utterly challenges claims made by the author.He is of opinion that it is important to reduce the salt from lake to save fish and birds life,but this methods aren't realistic and practical.
To begin with,The author argues that one way is to fill the lake water in desalination facilities and then evaporate it,then salt and water will be separated,so we can cool the steam down and return the water to lake.This specific argument is challenged by the lecturer.He claims that if we evaporate water,the salt remain in facility and we can fetch the water into lake again,but this method poses some problem.By doing that some material remain in water dissolved.if we bring the water back into lake,wind can distribute this harmful chemical material to air,so by breathing air people’s health get damaged.
Secondly,the writer suggests that dilute the level of the salt by filling water to lake from ocean,because oceans salt density is lower than lake.The lecturer,however,rebuts this by mentioning that although we can reduce the salt density, it requires to build canals and pipelines to guide the water,and this operation is so expensive,so local government can’t cope with it.
Finally,the author states that we can divide lake into few parts and reduce the salt level in some portions.In contrast,the lecturer position that is method isn’t work for very long time.Because geologic activities like earthquake can destroy the walls,as a result two part of water get combined and salt level won’t reduce,and it will back to first state.
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...lt from lake to save fish and birds life,but this methods arent realistic and practi...
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...ombined and salt level won't reduce,and it will back to first state.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, in contrast, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 30.3222958057 139% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1373.03311258 111% => OK
No of words: 289.0 270.72406181 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28719723183 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95593285817 2.5805825403 115% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 145.348785872 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567474048443 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 419.366225166 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 21.2450331126 339% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.8110715302 49.2860985944 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 382.0 110.228320801 347% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.25 21.698381199 333% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.0 7.06452816374 425% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 4.19205298013 763% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.6 13.3589403974 296% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.6 53.8541721854 -3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 5.55761589404 263% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 11.0289183223 285% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.59 12.2367328918 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.69 8.42419426049 139% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 63.6247240618 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 10.7273730684 266% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.498013245 293% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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