TPO4-Integrated writing
In the lecture, the professor made several points about dinosaurs. The reading passage claims that dinosaurs are endotherms. However, the professor finds all the ideas implausible and presents some evidence to refute them all. The professor's lecture casts doubt on the reading by using <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-2FB759192F8639B0C531A2A2DCDE62B7" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_1365" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: several" data-pwa-suggestions="several" data-pwa-dictionary-word="a number of" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">a number of</pwa> points <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-7CF76ABF8B5AB4F8E6135B29A9CF2612" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_1603" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="that are " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">that are </pwa>contrary to that dinosaurs are endotherms.
First<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-3C69391613EDAE306AAAB0D27F038AD8" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_2523" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word=" of all" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done"> of all</pwa>, the author holds a view that as dinosaurs fossils found in the polar region, they can maintain its temperature above that of the surrounding environment. so they are endotherms. The professor casts doubt on this point that dinosaurs could migrate <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-94901D76AD1B6A4ED2AD14894AF28322" data-pwa-rule-id="CRFSR_TO_10" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible confused word" data-pwa-suggestions="two" data-pwa-dictionary-word="to" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">to</pwa> <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-22B5239D743476E162C7205054D82030" data-pwa-rule-id="MOST_COMPARATIVE" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Use only 'warmer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative." data-pwa-suggestions="warmer" data-pwa-dictionary-word="more warmer" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">more warmer</pwa> places in the cold months or hibernating.
Second, the reading passage asserts that as the dinosaur has its legs underneath its body, it can run efficiently, so it's endotherms. Although the professor highlights the fact that its legs position doesn't mean it can run, instead it can grow to a very large size, and this size has a benefit for it.
Finally, the reading passage brings up the idea that <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-090519BC7E6CE71214261E8422295D2A" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_1753" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="the presence of " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">the presence of</pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-090519BC7E6CE71214261E8422295D2A" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_1753" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="the presence of " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done"> </pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-DBE960699211656DABDB1DDB0C128403" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: Haversian" data-pwa-suggestions="diversion" data-pwa-dictionary-word="Haversian" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">Haversian</pwa> canals in bone is a strong indicator that the dinosaur is an endotherm, on the contrary, the professor contends that there is a material type that thickens a bone and makes dinosaur stop growing in a cooler climate, so its growth goes from rapid to slow to rapid and endotherms <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-D9D5BC72799963A07718F24D041D2A7C" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_2342" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Can you use a more specific verb?" data-pwa-suggestions="explode" data-pwa-dictionary-word="grow rapidly" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">grow rapidly</pwa> even in a cold climate.
In conclusion, the points made in the lecture contrasts with the reading. migrating probability, the position of legs and noncontinuous growing <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-B034DE68AE5CE904C0D7A30570307446" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_2033" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: show" data-pwa-suggestions="show" data-pwa-dictionary-word="demonstrate" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">demonstrate</pwa> that dinosaurs are endotherms is in doubt.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 523, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ve that of the surrounding environment. so they are endotherms. The professor cast...
^^
Line 4, column 1302, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'warmer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: warmer
...lass='pwa-mark pwa-mark-done'>more warmer places in the cold months or hibe...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 201, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...hlights the fact that its legs position doesnt mean it can run, instead it can grow to...
^^^^^^
Line 13, column 75, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Migrating
...the lecture contrasts with the reading. migrating probability, the position of legs and n...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 22.412803532 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4697.0 1373.03311258 342% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 408.0 270.72406181 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 11.512254902 5.08290768461 226% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.04702891845 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 13.7180212084 2.5805825403 532% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 218.0 145.348785872 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53431372549 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 1266.3 419.366225166 302% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 3.1 1.55342163355 200% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 14.0 8.23620309051 170% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 34.0 21.2450331126 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 502.149290274 49.2860985944 1019% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 391.416666667 110.228320801 355% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 34.0 21.698381199 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06452816374 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 49.8 13.3589403974 373% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -89.93 53.8541721854 -167% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 5.55761589404 327% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.3 11.0289183223 311% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 50.07 12.2367328918 409% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.51 8.42419426049 125% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 63.6247240618 211% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.7273730684 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.498013245 149% => OK
text_standard: 50.0 11.2008830022 446% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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