Tpo21. integrated

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Tpo21. integrated

in the lecture, the professor made several points about genetic modification; he argues that genetic modification is useful but had some severe results. However, the reading contends that genetic modification has beneficial effects. the professor's lecture casts doubt on the reading by using several<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-47B657AB9DDBAEB3FA2DFEAB4FBE12DE" data-pwa-rule-id="DET_CG_2" data-pwa-category="" data-pwa-hint="Possible missing determiner" data-pwa-suggestions="a number~the number" data-pwa-dictionary-word="number" class="pwa-mark-done"></pwa> points contrary to the benefits of genetic modification.

the first point the professor uses to cast doubt on the reading is that genetically <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-340744EF3DEBA5023F6AB6C072879ED6" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_2068" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: changed" data-pwa-suggestions="changed" data-pwa-dictionary-word="modified" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">modified</pwa> trees have resistance to one type of climatic conditions, he explained that unmodified trees have genetic diverse to climatic changes and even most of them could die during adverse weather, they still a part of them exists. Unlike genetic modification trees that <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-009FFE36BD4E17F3F2FC22BCE5ACD6A3" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_1495" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="are&nbsp;designed to&nbsp;" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">are</pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-009FFE36BD4E17F3F2FC22BCE5ACD6A3" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_1495" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="are&nbsp;designed to&nbsp;" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">&nbsp;designed to&nbsp;</pwa>withstand only one condition and will all die if exist climatic change. This point cast doubt on reading as the reading claims they survive much time and have more resistance.

the second point the professor uses to cast doubt on the reading was their high cost. it said the person has to pay to the company for every tree seed he will plant and <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-76A4936738A473D99D2F1C8B22645D7A" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="the reading passage contradicted this" data-pwa-dictionary-word="this was contradicted by the reading passage" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">this was contradicted by the reading passage</pwa> as it stated that it brings economic benefits as it grows faster and produces much yield

another point the professor uses to cast doubt on the reading was effecting of genetically <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-60887B741316FB69971B567B78454E54" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_2068" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: changed" data-pwa-suggestions="changed" data-pwa-dictionary-word="modified" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">modified</pwa> trees on unmodified ones, he said as they grow <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-67AA53775D9F7F841778EA4058B2F5DB" data-pwa-rule-id="COMMA_SPL" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible comma splice." data-pwa-suggestions="faster;" data-pwa-dictionary-word="faster," class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">faster,</pwa> they compete the others for water and nutrients so genetic <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-3DAAA85998853A9A69399B49EBA9F16B" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_2068" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: changed" data-pwa-suggestions="changed" data-pwa-dictionary-word="modified" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">modified</pwa> trees weaken the others. although the reading argues that genetic trees would cater for <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-45FD4D708910A608885D29C38AACBC51" data-pwa-rule-id="DET_CG_2" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible missing determiner" data-pwa-suggestions="a requirement~the requirement" data-pwa-dictionary-word="requirement" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">requirement</pwa> of wood in many and save the endangered native trees.

in conclusion, the lecture contrasts with the reading by several points. genetic trees' resistance to climatic change, their high cost, and weakness of other non <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-05D8E9F5D0C37D45D5C80E06D7945001" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_2068" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: changed" data-pwa-suggestions="changed" data-pwa-dictionary-word="modified" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">modified</pwa> ones <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-9CA39808BC6E7578C5ACD5ED8FC152C8" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_2033" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: show" data-pwa-suggestions="show" data-pwa-dictionary-word="demonstrate" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">demonstrate</pwa> that they are profitable is in doubt.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, still, as to, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 5341.0 1373.03311258 389% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 459.0 270.72406181 170% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 11.6361655773 5.08290768461 229% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.04702891845 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 13.9849885651 2.5805825403 542% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 220.0 145.348785872 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479302832244 0.540411800872 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1452.6 419.366225166 346% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 3.2 1.55342163355 206% => Avg_syllables_per_word is high.

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 38.0 21.2450331126 179% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 455.997228305 49.2860985944 925% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 445.083333333 110.228320801 404% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 38.25 21.698381199 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06452816374 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.09492273731 147% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 4.19205298013 429% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 4.45695364238 224% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0535003276187 0.272083759551 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049370847266 0.0996497079465 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329590507928 0.0662205650399 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0555482408756 0.162205337803 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329146810715 0.0443174109184 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 52.5 13.3589403974 393% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -102.45 53.8541721854 -190% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 5.55761589404 365% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 37.0 11.0289183223 335% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 50.82 12.2367328918 415% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.42419426049 115% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 63.6247240618 190% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.7273730684 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.498013245 164% => OK
text_standard: 53.0 11.2008830022 473% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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