TPO42
The reading specifies that there are three reasons that prevent milions of birds get harmed when they try to fly through glass windows. However, the professor explains that this reasons do not effectively make a change and refutes each of author's reasons.
First of all, businesses can use one way glass which only transparent one direction instead of regular glass. Nevertheless, the lecturer contradicts the idea reasoning that when we use one way glass birds still see the reflex of sky on this glass and the do not understand the concept of the mirror and they cannot distinguish the difference between regular glass and one way glass.
Second, based on the reading, companies can paint designs or colorful lines on regular window glass. In contrast, the professor states that when we painting a design of thing stripes over the glass, birds see this stripes as a holes and they try to fly through out this holes which make bird injury. The only solution is to we painting this design very small that cause the room in the building become too dark.
Third, according to the reading, humans can create an artificial magnetic field which guide birds away from buildings. the lecturer opposes this point by saying that the artificial magnetic only guide birds when they are trying to migrate a long distance from a cold area to warm area and this magnetic tell them where they fly. Also, birds using their eye and bright light for flying short distances and this artificial magnetic have not a affect for this.
Therefore, the specific points mentioned in the reading do not make sense.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 152, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vertheless, the lecturer contradicts the idea reasoning that when we use one way ...
^^
Line 2, column 252, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...see the reflex of sky on this glass and the do not understand the concept of the mirro...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
... stripes as a holes and they try to fly through out this holes which make bird injury. The ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...a holes and they try to fly through out this holes which make bird injury. The only ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 119, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... which guide birds away from buildings. the lecturer opposes this point by saying t...
^^^
Line 4, column 439, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s and this artificial magnetic have not a affect for this. Therefore, the specif...
^
Line 4, column 441, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...and this artificial magnetic have not a affect for this. Therefore, the specific points m...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, therefore, third, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.4613686534 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1373.03311258 96% => OK
No of words: 271.0 270.72406181 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87453874539 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35227045451 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 145.348785872 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546125461255 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0526611897 49.2860985944 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.090909091 110.228320801 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 21.698381199 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06452816374 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.562027286072 0.272083759551 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.201781648068 0.0996497079465 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114592391995 0.0662205650399 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255389654221 0.162205337803 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152521712306 0.0443174109184 344% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 53.8541721854 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.