Venus is inhospitable or not
The article states that maintaining life in the venus surface is not only improbable but also shear challenge and he provides three reasons for support.Conversely, the professor explains that only installing a substation above fifty kilometer high from the ground is a optimum solution to keep the life hood quite comfortably and he refutes each and every point of the author rationally.
First, the reading claims that the pressure is 90 times higher than the earth surface which is the epitome reason not continuing life in the venus surface. Additionally it states that spacecraft as well as human-being will be crushed if they land on the surface due to excessive pressure.Turning to other side of the argument, the professor opposes this view point that if the station is efficiently functioned, then at the height of fifty kilometer, the intensity of pressure is quite congruent to our earth surface. That's why in effect we will feel free and quite comfortable.
Second, the author posits that there are no management of water and oxygen. Moreover, sulfuric acid and carbon-di-oxide are very prominent in the atmosphere of venus. Especially having carbon-di-oxide more is the another issue not to sustain life in that area.It also depicts that idea of importing oxygen and water is not practical solution to hold up life in that surface. In this respect, the lecture opines a different outlook that in the station there will be created a special chemical environment to make water from sulfuric acid and superfluous carbon-di-oxide.As a result, to supply water from the earth will not taken into consideration as they are having aplomb to activate the process.
Third,the reading asserts that as very little sunlight is permeable to the surface to venus, it is inhospitable location to live. The reading also upholds that only 40 percent sunlight comes to surface and rest of it reflects to the spaces as clouds of it is very dense with the help of containing enormous amount of carbon-di-oxide. Basically, lack of enough light prevents solar power cells and human will feel deficiency to create electricity. On the other hand the professor is reciprocal of this opinion. He says that above 50 kilometers from the surface, the cabon-di-opxide level is not very dense so that it will be easy use sunlight. However, if the station runs, cloud level will not create of such a problem, so easily we will install the solar plant to demand us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, then, third, well, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.4613686534 191% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 30.3222958057 165% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2041.0 1373.03311258 149% => OK
No of words: 406.0 270.72406181 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02709359606 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.04702891845 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9839217853 2.5805825403 116% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 145.348785872 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519704433498 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 419.366225166 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 21.2450331126 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.688703468 49.2860985944 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.785714286 110.228320801 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 21.698381199 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06452816374 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103774768401 0.272083759551 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417757676841 0.0996497079465 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808735794469 0.0662205650399 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0577290775674 0.162205337803 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184393773919 0.0443174109184 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.3589403974 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.8541721854 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.0289183223 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 63.6247240618 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.7273730684 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.498013245 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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