You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response Your response will be judged on the basis of the quality of your writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and their relationship to the reading passage Typically an effect

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You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of the quality of your writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and their relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made reading passage.

The reading text and lecture are both about the why American wood companies are not much interested into eco-certified products. The author of this article feel that, The American wood industries are do not need certification now a days. Lecturer is dispite these claims and provide some factual detail

Firstly, The reading states that, American consumer is not paying too much attention to the eco-Certified products. Author argues that, they this that, this products are are and advertisement is not a trust worthy and genuine. However, lecturer said that, American Customer are have their faith in the certification agency. Additionally, he point out that, They choose their products favorably according the level of trust in that products.

Secondly, The test suggests that, Certified wood products are more expensive than normal wood. Author believe that, American consumers are more sensitive to price factor of products. That is why american companies are not much interested into cartification of their products. In contrast, The lacture stance that, Price factor is only affect the mindset of the person, when the price of same product is much more higher and lower. Moreover, He not out that small group of American are much more interested into conserving nature.

In the end, the writer argues that, American wood company would export their certified product in foreign market, at that time it can generate higher profit. But, at the same time wood merchants are satisfied with their currant consumer base. On the other hand, The lecturer contends that, to reduce the competition of certified wood products american company should enter into the bussiness of certified wood products. futher he explain that, If they are not doing that, then many

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: THE_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'why'?
Suggestion: why
...reading text and lecture are both about the why American wood companies are not much in...
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Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
... that, The American wood industries are do not need certification now a days. Lect...
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Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...ndustries are do not need certification now a days. Lecturer is dispite these claims and p...
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Line 1, column 231, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...tries are do not need certification now a days. Lecturer is dispite these claims and p...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ts. Author argues that, they this that, this products are are and advertisement is n...
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Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: are
...ues that, they this that, this products are are and advertisement is not a trust worthy...
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Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...cturer said that, American Customer are have their faith in the certification agency...
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Line 3, column 342, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'points'.
Suggestion: points
... certification agency. Additionally, he point out that, They choose their products fa...
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Line 5, column 409, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'higher' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: higher
... when the price of same product is much more higher and lower. Moreover, He not out that sm...
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Line 7, column 421, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Futher
...e bussiness of certified wood products. futher he explain that, If they are not doing ...
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Line 7, column 431, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'explains'.
Suggestion: explains
...s of certified wood products. futher he explain that, If they are not doing that, then ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, in contrast, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.4613686534 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1373.03311258 108% => OK
No of words: 281.0 270.72406181 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29181494662 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59108949287 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487544483986 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 419.366225166 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7667785233 49.2860985944 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1333333333 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06452816374 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0353595172863 0.272083759551 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0170973777442 0.0996497079465 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0201560956211 0.0662205650399 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0278133625636 0.162205337803 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154703523495 0.0443174109184 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 63.6247240618 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.7273730684 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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