Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Education sets the foundation of successful career for everyone. Presently, money plays a magnificent role to uplift the standard of living. Thus, it is argued that educating students about financial management should be necessary in the schools. Here, I would like to accord with the given statement.
There are manifold points to shore up the former view. First and foremost, youngsters, being show off, are spending lavishly on the fashion trends such as clothes, shoes, coiffures and other electronic gadgets unnecessarily in this dazzling world. Besides this, modern parents are also forced b...
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Thanks sir I did not use the
Thanks sir
I did not use the in fron of youngsters becouse I was talking about youngsters generally for every young person .
And I also avoided "the" in front of money in the introduction as I was writing money first time in the esaay
I want to know is it right to avoid the if we wish to say about generally everyone without specific group ????
Could I avoid "the" in front of noun when I am introducing it for the very first time in the essay ????
Not exactly, you may use
Not exactly, you may use 'a/an' instead of 'the' in front of countable nouns.
A countable noun:
when it is singular: 'a/an' Always.
When plural: it takes 'the' if it refers to a definite, specific group,
no 'the' if it is used in a general sense.
The guest of honor arrived late.
You are welcome as a guest in our home.
The guests at your party yesterday made a lot of noise.
Guests are welcome here anytime.
Uncountable nouns:
never take 'a/an', but 'the', or no 'the' if it is used in a general sense.
Information is a precious commodity in our computerized world.
The information in your files is correct.
Sugar has become more expensive recently.
Please pass me the sugar.
one of the most significant aspect
one of the most significant aspects
Sentence: Besides this, modern parents are also forced by the young children to fulfil their mighty aspirations.
Error: fulfil Suggestion: fulfill
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 333 350
No. of Characters: 1741 1500
No. of Different Words: 193 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.272 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.228 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.745 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 135 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 104 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 78 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 48 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.65 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.747 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.288 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.517 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.053 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5