The pie charts below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s
The pie chart given illustrates the percentage of some factors that affected to the productivity of Agricutural land. Meanwhile, the table below describes the rate of soil which was destroyed by those issues.
Overall, the most common reason that caused land degradation was the over-grazing by cattles. Besides, European countries seemed to have the most land degraded.
To specify, over-grazing accounted for a significant proportion, at 35% of total cases of land-destroyed, which was 5 times higher the figure for that of other triaval reasons. Meanwhile, it is remarkable that...
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