You have met an old friend in another city on your last business trip. Now you are going on another business trip in the same city and want to meet him/her again. Write a letter to your friend and say
- Express your excitement about the last meeting.
- Give details about your new business trip.
- Suggest an arrangement to meet again.
Dear Atul,
How are you? Hope you are well. It was nice to meet you after long time during my business trip. After meeting you and spending time with you in the evening for 2 weeks, I never felt that I was on the official tour.
Definitely there was couple of activities that we done together that I like the most. Firstly, our trip to Ocean Park was one of the memorable trips at the weekend especially watching a star attraction of dolphin and panda show. Secondly, it was fantastic to go to junk boat party. Many thanks for your invitation on this. Finally, I cannot forget to talk about the delicious Indian food that I had with you in one of the eminent Indian Restaurants.
You will be blissful to hear that company had planned one more official trip for me in the next month for 2 weeks. Probably, this time my trip would be bit relaxed compared to last time as there are only few meetings that I need to attend in the morning with a client. In the afternoon, I can plan the work as per my choice. Therefore, I would request you also to come down to the city, so that we can spend time together as last time. Moreover, this time you can stay with me as I heard that company would arrange a service apartment of 2 bedrooms with kitchen facilities.
I am looking forward to hearing soon from you. Once you will confirm, accordingly I will confirm this trip to my company.
Regards
Rahul
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Hope you are well.
Hope you are doing well.
It was nice to meet you after long time during my business trip.
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
there was couple of activities that we done together
there were a couple of activities that we have done together
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