Many People believe that it is better to learn something in a group rather than individually do you agree or disagree

Essay topics:

Many People believe that it is better to learn something in a group rather than individually. do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays it is quite common to see that learners prefer to do group study than individual research. It is also being argued that group study is much better than individual study. I totally agree with the later statement.

To start with, one of the major reason that support my belief is that group study gives us option to share our knowledge. In other words, when we learn something as a team, we have more thoughts and more ideas in contrast to an individual study. As a matter of fact, when a team of four people is learning something new, four brains are working simultaneously, hence, we have multiple thoughts at the same time.

Another key reason that supports, the learning in a group over individual learning is that , it is much more time efficient. If we do group study in a logical manner, we can divide the main task in sub-tasks and assign them to individual team member. this will not only saves the time but aslo brings much better outcome, with respect to individual person's experience and level of expertise.

In conclusion, i agree that learning in a group will be more advantageous in terms of time saving and knowledge sharing.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (19 votes)

Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, in conclusion, in contrast, as a matter of fact, in contrast to, in other words, to start with, with respect to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 202.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72772277228 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58497272921 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574257425743 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6030673404 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207916218707 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875104969408 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039416493573 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13359701497 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346241216759 0.056905535591 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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