In many countries, students who behave badly in class are expelled from their school and never allowed to return. Many consider this an effective way to educate while others disagree.
Discuss both sides of the argument and share your opinion. Where possible, support your points with personal examples.
Most schools have devised their own set of rules and regulations to which students must abide to or risk expulsion in some cases. Some people contend that permanently barring a badly-behaved student from an educational establishment act as an excellent moral lesson for children. Nevertheless, others prose that this treatment may be unfair and bear a negative consequence on children’s development under certain circumstances.
On one hand, permanent expulsion for wrongdoings can educate children into growing into law-abiding and responsible citizens. Indeed, they come to learn about acceptab...
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Score: 8.5 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 330 350
No. of Characters: 1804 1500
No. of Different Words: 211 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.262 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.467 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.082 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 143 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 114 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 87 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 62 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.61 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.301 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.523 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.066 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5