Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countries such asAustralia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college oruniversity.Why do so many people want to study in English?Why is English such an important international language?
English is one of the most dominating language of the world which is having its impact on every field of work. Undoubtedly, English play a much greater role in the world that it is inevitable for people to ignore it fully. Though, people feel English will connect them properly with the world because it is a medium of communication in every parts of the world. Thus, people from different parts of the world want to study in an English speaking nation.
Often, we see a number of students want to study further in countries like America, England, Australia because these are the best known E...
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English is one of the most dominating language of the world which is having its impact on every field of work.
Suggestion:English is one of the most dominating languages of the world which is having its impact on every field of work.
Sentence: Undoubtedly, English play a much greater role in the world that it is inevitable for people to ignore it fully.
Description: The fragment English play a is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace play with verb, past tense
Sentence: Secondly, it is also beneficial to get an authorised degree from the best universities of the world as this will help in getting a high profile job anywhere in the world means a person can choose where to live according to that person's convenience.
Error: authorised Suggestion: authorized
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 33 21.0 (sentences should be shorter)
Sentence Length SD: 12.853 7.5
Number of Paragraphs: 8 5 (You don't list 4-5 reasons here. You only need to list 2-3 reasons and argue.)
The big problem for this essay is that you used 'However', and 'Even though'. If you used them at the beginning of a paragraph, means you are going to change your ideas. However, you didn't.
Be very sensitive to use However or Even though inside the essays. It is going to mis-organize the essay if they are not used properly.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 495 350
No. of Characters: 2361 1500
No. of Different Words: 215 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.717 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.77 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.541 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 171 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 128 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 80 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 33 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.853 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.44 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.763 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.208 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 8 5