You missed an important meeting at work Write a letter to your manager In the letter Apologize for not going Explain why you were not there Say how you will make up for it

Essay topics:

You missed an important meeting at work. Write a letter to your manager. In the letter:
• Apologize for not going
• Explain why you were not there
• Say how you will make up for it

Dear Mr Dave,

I am writing this letter to apologize for my absence in a significant meeting held on last Friday. Honestly, the circumstances were not in my control which made me unable to attend this important business gathering.

Let me explain what happened at length. Actually, while coming to our workplace on that morning, I met with an accident. Although it was not serious accident, I was not able to get up and walk properly. I was admitted in the hospital by some people and after initial diagnosis I came to know that there was hairline fracture in my left leg. As a part of treatment, doctor had advised me to do complete bed rest and less movement to get back as soon as possible. So, this made me unable to come to office.

I totally understand the importance of this meeting and my presence as a team coordinator between company and client. However, I missed this vital business deal, I will coordinate with other colleagues who were present and try to understand agenda and way forwards to continue our business.

Once again, I sincerely regret missing this meeting and hope you will understand my situation.

Yours sincerely,
James Smith

Votes
Average: 9.2 (17 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, honestly, however, if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83084577114 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73215422628 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1963455769 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9166666667 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174825381461 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554058868239 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561455080068 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108695405685 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559126853247 0.0580467560999 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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