Having children is less important than in the past
It is undeniable that having children is a blessing for everyone. However, I believe that raising children is not essential in today's life. I feel this way for the following two reasons.
To begin with, raising up children is more expensive than it was in the past. Food, school supplies, transportations expenses are such some examples of the high costs that are associated with having kids. Raising up children increases our monthly bills and requires us to work more hours to cover those expenses. For example, twenty years ago, back to the time when my parents raised me up. Children were not required to learn in school. Therefore, parents did not have to worry about school supplies costs. In contrast, anyone who has kids now is required by law to send them to school for learning.
My parents told me that their cost of living didn't increase too much when they got children. In fact, they were able to save a lot of money each month for the summer vacation even after they got children. On the other hand, my monthly spending have increased significantly since I got my first kid. I used to be able to save $300 each month before I got my son. Now, I can't save any penny. As you can see, having children is more costly nowadays.
Additionally, having kids put more responsibilities on their parents. To be more specific, parents are the first to be questioned if any thing happens to their kids. For instance, my friend's son fell last week while he was playing. He did not have any serious injury but he had some scratches on his right hand. My friend was scared so she run to the emergency room to check on him. When she told the doctor what happened. He called the police and they questioned her for over than an hour. They asked her hundreds of questions and told her that if this happens again, they will take her son and she will not be able to see him anymore. Although, my friend did not do anything wrong but the police blamed her for this incident. As you can see, having a child increases the responsibility on us.
To conclude, I strongly agree that raising kids is less important that it was in the past because it increase our cost of living and it means that we are responsible of any thing that may happen to them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...and it means that we are responsible of any thing that may happen to them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in contrast, in fact, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49019607843 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47023807042 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531862745098 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8913658003 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8518518519 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1111111111 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221432085388 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059071813177 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664239110777 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126036225672 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386420277621 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.17 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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