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Integrated writing task.
The reading passage is supporting the idea of team work especially at schools. However, the listening passage casts doubts on the reasons that are suggested in the reading passage of why team work is considered advantageous.
First of all, the professor in the lecture quotes that team work usually takes longer time as a result of all the decisions that everybody should agree on. According to the professor all these debate issues is considered to be waste of time. On the other hand, the reading passage claims that team work provides students with quicker solutions, for the fact that all speci...
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According to the professor all these debate issues is considered to be waste of time
Suggestion: According to the professor, all these debate issues are considered to be waste of time
Sentence: This actually refutes with what is mentioned in the reading passage of how creativity would be increased with the team work, as many ideas could be combined togother to create an original result.
Error: togother Suggestion: together
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Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 9 9
No. of Words: 277 250
No. of Characters: 1350 1200
No. of Different Words: 138 120
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.08 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.874 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.438 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 95 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 76 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 43 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 30.778 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.587 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.778 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.47 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.719 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.161 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4