A great number of people desire to move to a different country and start a new life. However this may not be as easy as they thought
What kind of problems do you think a person might experiences
These days, lots of people wish to transfer to a disparate country and begin a new life. Nevertheless, the reality is not what they have expected. This essay will outline several issues that a person may cope with while settling down in a foreign nation.
First of all, one of the massive problems is language barrier. They are not used to speaking an arduous language, aside from their mother tongue. Consequently, they would face with difficulty in making acquaintance of neighborhood, as others cannot fully understand what they want to express. Secondly, culture shock might be their perplexed challenge. Each country has its own customs and cultures, as well as festivals. Hence, foreigners would find it a colossal matter to integral with the local people.
Thirdly, another big question is weather. Some places are hot, some are freezing, the rest are snowy all day long. They could suffer from health-damaging diseases due to the changeable weather. Finally, owing to the high cost of living in some countries, they would have a lot of great hardship in order to live peacefully. Taxes, fees, personal invoices, etc are what they have to pay attention. Moreover, getting a stable job in a strange place is partly an enormous concern for each individual. Because of diverse conditions of an occupation, a person's qualifications and skills would be useless, as he or she could work on a better target in his or her native country to contrary.
To conclude, in order to harmonize a different existence and avoid unexpected truth, a person must learn about the country, new language, as well as be open-hearted to everyone
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, hence, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0221402214 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84143384095 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660516605166 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7889326193 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0588235294 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52941176471 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186818806712 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486124933382 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377766453935 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110098820651 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331829636596 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.67 Out of 6
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