Recommendation letter
Being the departmental head, I feel privileged while recommending Mr. Masud, the most dedicated student I have even seen in my 30-years teaching profession. If I start telling about him, surely I must talk about our first meet at the university library; while most of the students were rushing out from the campus in the eve of winter vacation, it was Masud who was staying up late at the library among pile of books to finish not only his assignment, but also finding articles for his group mate too. I first thought finding someone at the library at an awkward time maybe a coincidence, later I got myself wrong when I found him directly as my student in the next year. Being a teacher of pharmacy, it was obvious to see the students who always showed reluctance for the code of ethics, but in this case, Masud was unique. He was always concerned with the welfare of the mass people of our country through his subject. So far I know, he came from a middle class family and maybe this is one of the prime reasons which always acted for him as a pull factor to put people first as a beneficiary of this subject knowledge. At the last year of university, when most of the students feel a bit euphoric dreaming about “profitable” job market considering the “money matters”, Masud was indifferent. He was obsessed on how patients are being wrongly treated in our country leaving the poor people in vulnerable situations both in physical as well as financial aspects. That is why, when most of my thesis students came up with the proposal of phytochemical analysis, or pharmaceutical technology, Masud proved him different by finding out the rationality and irrationality of using antibiotics in Bangladesh. I was surprised how he worked door to door with the root level patients as well as the doctors to gather large sample data of antibiotic usage in our country.
His dedication and hard-work, finally, did not go in vain. He identified that in Bangladesh antibiotics are used carelessly and to our utter astonishment, sometimes those are prescribed by the non-qualified doctors without any proven necessity, which is somehow linked with the AMR issues we are discussing currently worldwide. Even in Bangladesh, MDR cases are becoming more burning questions as there is not enough last resort to treat resistant cases, resulting in a significant financial loss to the patient party who are unfortunately not being subsidized by the government for a single penny. No doubt to contend that we always pay lip service to these critical issues, but if we had lots of like-minded Masud with the same thought process, maybe our health-sector might have seen some lights at the end of the tunnel. Despite the need of the patients are being unmet always, it never seized the opportunity to talk with him on this kind of more and more mature issues in different forums including University Research Center as well as Alumni Association where he was one of the founder members. I can remember, during his third year, when there was an outbreak of diarrhea in the outskirts of Dhaka, he raised a charitable fund for supplying ORS, free of cost to the victims which clearly depicts Masud’s sensitivity to mass people’s welfare.
However, as he left the university after graduation, we lost contact with each other and at that time communication, connectivity etc. were not like what we see today. After long years back, when Masud came to me at the university and explained his desire for higher studies that directly correlates with the economical approach in healthcare management, I was not surprised, rather I am sure that our country will be able to utilize him in the future. Moreover, I was amazed to see how the illusive corporate world job could not buy his dream of helping people. I strongly believe, if Masud gets the opportunity to learn more, he will definitely be able serve our country in the next coming days in a better way since the government itself was looking for a change maker.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, third, well, while, i feel, kind of, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 13.1623246493 251% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 70.0 24.0651302605 291% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 101.0 41.998997996 240% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3343.0 1615.20841683 207% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 686.0 315.596192385 217% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87317784257 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.11777311996 4.20363070211 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90036511927 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 364.0 176.041082164 207% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530612244898 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1055.7 506.74238477 208% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 5.43587174349 350% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.7715417001 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.19047619 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6666666667 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.80952380952 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0106238674334 0.244688304435 4% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00444739887679 0.084324248473 5% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0198893724231 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00590866290252 0.151304729494 4% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00835611121223 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 171.0 78.4519038076 218% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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