Letter of recommendation

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Letter of recommendation

It gives me immense pleasure in recommending Mr. Dhaval Bhojavani for the Master’s program at your university. I have taught him microcontroller subject in his under-graduate course. Dhaval has been a great student and he demonstrated by secured his position in top 10 student out of 90 students from his class throughout his 4 years at college. He is not only good in his academics but also in verbal and written communication.
He successfully presented his final year project “AUTOMATIC POWER FACTOR IMPROVEMENT AND OVERCUREENT PROTECTION USING MICROCONTROLLER” along with his 2 other team members and secured great score in this project. This project showed his capability to understand the Arduino programming and presentation skills. This project was good exposure for his first hands-on interaction of software and hardware interplay.
There are various factors which really helped him progressed well in the competitive market. The BVM engineering college is situated in the vibrant environment filled with colleges and universities along with their enthusiastic students. In this way, students from this area can participate into various inter-college tech events. Due to this competitive environment, Dhaval has taken very keen interest in participating into various technical events in not only from his college but in other colleges as well within city.
In sum, Dhaval has great learning curve and I have full trust in him that he will surpass expectations in succeeding in his chosen field of study. Now, he will perform increasingly and better with his undergraduate degree and decent amount of industry experience. So, I strongly recommend his candidature for master’s program at your esteemed university.
Please feel free to contact if need any further clarification on this.

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Average: 1.1 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 423, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion of software and hardware interplay. There are various factors which really h...
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Line 4, column 132, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
...xpectations in succeeding in his chosen field of study. Now, he will perform increasi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, thus, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54676258993 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34979201862 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643884892086 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9925058069 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.8 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.93333333333 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0337069714475 0.244688304435 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0149961262909 0.084324248473 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382630704778 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0199933353798 0.151304729494 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024768278233 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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