In the world today, people tend to read books less and turn to social media more for information. Why?
Nowadays, we are living in technology life. People create many things to help them have an easy life. They make work tools and increase labor force. They create the computer to help them type document, paint, manage and soon. Social media are one of the best things from human’s creation. It helps people connect with each other, entertain and find information. Therefore, today people usually use social media to find information instead of books. Today, I will tell some reasons for that.
To begin with, social media is a convenient tool. If you want to look for something, you just type some keywords and enter, it will help you find thousand or million results. It’s very quickly and easy. When you use books to find the information you must find what book have your information. After that, you must spend the time to look up information in that book. It’s not faster than social media. Sometimes it’s more difficult than to find something.
Secondly, Social media is very diverse. It can help people find many types of information like video, picture, news and more. Books cannot do that. The information you find in a book is just words or pictures. It’s boring. Maybe, it’s hard to understand with some people.
Finally, finding information by social media is cheaper than finding by books. You just need a smartphone or laptop which connect with the Internet<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"></span> and you can find many things that you want. When you finding something with books, sometimes you need more than one book. In this problem, you must use that book, but in a different problem, maybe you must use others book.
To sum up, social media is a convenient instrument. It’s cheap and easy to find more and more information. But I’m not in favor of using it very often. It’s can make your brain become lazy. Books maybe are not easy to understand or to find something, but it will offer more things when you read it. I hope we can use media in a reasonable way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...ywords and enter, it will help you find thousand or million results. It's very quic...
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Line 2, column 158, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...nter, it will help you find thousand or million results. It's very quickly and eas...
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Line 2, column 208, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sults. It's very quickly and easy. When you use books to find the information y...
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Line 5, column 338, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a reasonable way" with adverb for "reasonable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...en you read it. I hope we can use media in a reasonable way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9273255814 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79505322654 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473837209302 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 16.0721442886 187% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.156408092 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.5 106.682146367 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.4666666667 20.7667163134 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.86666666667 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204642102063 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672601097498 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556575424057 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142226857889 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377006556589 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.13 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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