The 18th century due to industrialization a lot of people migrate to develop countries. This affected lifestyle and increased major problems in develop countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, the phenomenon of migration has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question: to what extent industrialization has affected migration?. Whereas there are widely held notions that the primary purpose of migration is seeking jobs, on the contrary, most people stick to the idea the migration is widespread because of experiencing a new way of living. This essay will briefly compare and contrast both sides and eventually will draw a conclusion of why migration is the phenomenon of modernization and industrialization.
In the realm of economic, the immigration is inextricably tied up with new opportunities and demanding jobs, which indicates it might lead to a higher rate of employment, a decent salary, and more importantly, finding dream jobs. As a salient example, a study conducted by salient scientists revealed a positive correlation between developed countries, multiculturalism societies, as well as a lower rate of unemployment. Hence, it might be reasonable to indicate the pivotal role industry, modern technology, and job opportunities.
Another crucial perspective comes from globalization. The advancement of technology and widespread use of social media, without the slightest doubt, attribute to following dreams and luxury way of life in industrialized countries. A well-known example of such attribution is poverty lines in underdeveloped counties, which was a cause of concern since it was mistaken to take employment for granted. Consequently, this evidence presented above supports the likelihood of modernization and industrialized countries.
The idea of migration in the 20th century and 21st century has been a source of controversy and heated debates among sociologists and people. Grafting what elaborated above, the writer believes the notion that migration has mainly due to industrialization.
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...rialization. In the realm of economic, the immigration is inextricably tied up ...
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...ies. The idea of migration in the 20th century and 21st century has been a sour...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, consequently, hence, if, so, well, whereas, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 5.75862068966 382% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78985507246 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.63195135959 2.71678728327 134% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 139.433497537 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641304347826 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 1.56157635468 512% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6261482801 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.166666667 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20438019871 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636534715616 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533684775395 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104103059775 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341601826193 0.0609392437508 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 12.6369458128 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 53.1260098522 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 11.5310837438 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.9 8.32886699507 131% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 55.0591133005 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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