The mass media, including television, radio and newspapers, have great influence in shaping people's ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, the phenomenon of mass media and online community has been attracted scientists minds. In one point, many believe that influences on people’s mind should not be underestimated. On the contrary, there is a great controversy on how people’s behavior have been changed be spending their time watching news or in social media. In this essay, I will briefly discuss about how people should avoid mass media as much as they can in order to think clearly.
LinkedIn, Facebook and Instagram are familiar words these days, right? Probably because we are so engage in online communities that there has been no time for anything else. So, Is it good or bad? The answer depends on so many sophisticated elements, but the first impulsive answer is yes, why bad? Using online community, studies show, has increased the rate of emotional empathy among people. Alternatively, in another study, the index of democracy in countries with the more internet users has been increased. Studies show the more spending time in mass media, the more you become aware or today’s world situation and consequently the more you will be demanding.
In psychologists point’ of view, wasting time on low-flow activities such as watching news and surfing in the internet, in a great extent, could have isolated us and the word “isolation generation” have invented because of dramatic growth on spending time watching TV or activities like that. They believe that the most important influence of these media firstly targets people’s behavior. Disorders like depression and passive aggressive behavior are two primarily example of consequences of attracting to these online communities.
The influence of mass media, these days could not be neglected. Of course, there has been both good results and bas result after doing experiment of assessing these influences. Nevertheless, based on what has been said, I strongly agree that mass media can shape people’s minds in the way that could be useful.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, consequently, first, firstly, nevertheless, so, of course, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1207.87684729 141% => OK
No of words: 319.0 242.827586207 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32288401254 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01548171625 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 139.433497537 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583072100313 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 379.143842365 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5399966204 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8823529412 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 6.9802955665 201% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195563784794 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594369938757 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596735599675 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125266930227 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580947484803 0.0609392437508 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 55.0591133005 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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