The mass media, including television, radio and newspapers, have great influence in shaping people's ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Give reasons and relevant examples to support your answer.)
Recently, the phenomenon of mass media and online community has been attracted scientists minds. In one point, many believe that influences people’s mind should not be underestimated. On the contrary, there is a great controversy on how people’s behavior have been changed be spending their time watching the news or in social media. In this essay, I will briefly discuss how people should avoid mass media as much as they can in order to think clearly.
LinkedIn, Facebook, and Instagram are familiar words these days, right? Probably because we are so engaged in online communities that there has been no time for anything else. So, Is it good or bad? The answer depends on so many sophisticated elements, but the first impulsive answer is yes, why wrong? Spending time in online communities, studies show, has increased the rate of emotional empathy among people. Alternatively, in another study, the index of democracy in countries with more internet users has been increased. Studies show the more spending time in mass media, the more you become aware or today’s world situation and consequently, the more you will be demanding.
In psychologists point’ of view, wasting time on low-flow activities such as watching the news and surfing on the internet, in a great extent, could have isolated us and the word “isolation generation” have invented because of dramatic growth on spending time watching TV or activities like that. They believe that the most important influence of these media firstly targets people’s behavior. Disorders like depression and passive-aggressive behavior are two primarily examples of consequences of attracting to these online communities.
The influence of mass media, these days could not be neglected. Of course, there have been both good results, and bas result after experimenting assessing these influences. Nevertheless, based on what has been said, I strongly agree that mass media can shape people’s minds in a way that could be useful.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, consequently, first, firstly, nevertheless, so, of course, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1207.87684729 141% => OK
No of words: 317.0 242.827586207 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3880126183 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14691815448 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577287066246 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 379.143842365 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2690929845 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.470588235 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 6.9802955665 201% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172729954976 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553976002028 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471820655621 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113347430962 0.151781067708 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408939403702 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 55.0591133005 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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