Some people think genetically modified GM crops are a positive development Others however argue that they are potentially dangerous Discuss both views and give your opinion | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Some people think genetically modified (GM) crops are a positive development. Others, however, argue that they are potentially dangerous. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent year, due to advances in technology and science,a new phenomena has emerged; using a new types of crops famously known as GM foods. whereas authorities and goverments are advertising this kind of foods as a reliable source of sustenace, scientists, specifically, are still skeptical about the reliablity and future of GM foods, mostly because these kinds of foods are still in their early years of develompent and allegedly there are unkonwn or, maybe, dangerous side effects which are yet to discover. this essay aims to look at both sides and tell readers why these new sources can't be replanced with widely used and organic crops.
In last three decades, as a result of a sudden a striking increase in Earth population in one hand and degradation of environment and, consequnetly, acid rains on the other hand which leads to lack of arable lands in most part of the world, governmental bodies are trying to intruduce new methods to sustain their citizen. while in it's early years of developments, GM food are widely advertised to people as a reliable source of food. this new source of food can be produced easliy and modified to have all essential vitamins and minerals vitals for one's body. From the economic standpoint, this critical decision seems reasonable.
Nevertheless, from medical points of view, consuming GM foods are not fully studied, tested, and experimented. A recent study illustrated a case study in which the number of people fed GM food over a five-year period diagnosed with more potential cancerous cells and unknown disease has been increased significantly which has been given a cause for concern. Consequentlly, scientists and laboratories worldwide are alarmingly alerting people to the possible risk of consuming these types of foods.
In conclusion, Although there are unaviodable reasons and concrete evidences to move toward sustainable development and implementing innovative and revolutionary ideas, we still need to remember that most of these apporaches are in a trial and error stages and need to be fully supported by science.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...side effects which are yet to discover. this essay aims to look at both sides and te...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, nevertheless, so, still, whereas, while, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19642857143 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95602094161 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.5344821415 49.4020404114 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.727272727 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5454545455 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0964299966186 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357959525759 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0201604820135 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0530383848875 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233008064828 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, nevertheless, so, still, whereas, while, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments