Do you think consumer should avoid over packed products or it is responsibility of producer to avoid extra packaging of products?” Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience

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Do you think consumer should avoid over packed products or it is responsibility of producer to avoid extra packaging of products?” Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience

Recently, the phenomenon of proper packaging has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question; who does have the responsibility of packaging?. While experts thinks it’s the responsibility of buyers, others emphasize the role of producers. This essay will briefly discuss the both sides and will finally give overall conclusion which believe that manufacturer should avoid over packaging.
In The realm of market studies, a growing body of researchers stick to the notion that producers are the main cause of changing people’s buying habits meaning that they play a vital role in marketing and launching a products. For example, when a business is booming it’s products become popular, thus, this popularity can undoubtedly change the way that people think in terms of packaging, design, and using less and organic materials which leads to harm less the environment.
An important prospective comes from psychologists. They believe that the impression that marketers and companies of retailers give people is also a matter of importance. Nevertheless, more importantly, the people decide what and how to buy products. People can easily change the direction of society in terms of consuming and making brand popular or by ban a product or service, can make the authorities to make new decision to change their plan and the way they launch a product. Hence, experts in this field highlight the role of people.
The idea of packaging has drawn scientist attention. In my opinion, without the slightest doubt, I believe that people should be responsible for these actions.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 220, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a product' or simply 'products'?
Suggestion: a product; products
...a vital role in marketing and launching a products. For example, when a business is boomin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, finally, hence, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for example, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36614173228 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97135611429 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622047244094 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3591481061 50.4703680194 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.583333333 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155548839203 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047502616471 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350822256373 0.071462118173 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898865343018 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381487391866 0.0609392437508 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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