Actions speak louder than words. What is your opinion?
These days, there is a controversial debate between people about whether actions speak louder than words. There are a great number of people who interpret that everyone should try to act to what he promises in his personal life, while others hold an opponent’s view. I am inclined to believe that being a man of action not only develop positive characteristic in people, but also contributes to make friendship and trustworthiness.
There is no skepticism surrounding the fact that keeping your promise plays a pivotal role in making a self-confident person.This may be attributed to the fact that this inevitably creates a feeling of accomplishment in people, which might open avenues to new achievements so that people’s enthusiasm and determination will be amplified towards many daunting tasks. Specifically, a research study conducted by Yale University in 2015 has found that do as we promise could enhance people’s intellectual ability to make decision related to their social and personal life.
In addition, it is claimed that being a trustworthy person is a contributory factor in ameliorating the social issues. This is to say that honesty in action inevitably leads people to think the consequences of their actions in a more detailed and focused way, therefore, it would specialize the characteristics in people, which might stimulate them to acquire positive outcome in their social and personal life. The data yielded by a current study has shown that this personality trait would instill a strong feeling of self-esteem.
In a nutshell, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that action is much more effective than words as it would improve honesty in the society and has beneficial effect on people’s personality traits. It is highly recommended that individuals take the cognizance of these facts and establish guidelines to educate people to be more honest in their words.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 303.0 242.827586207 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36633663366 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23754133718 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 139.433497537 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594059405941 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.5024630542 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.6897107536 50.4703680194 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.6 104.977214359 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3 20.9669160288 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15034197185 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638237281437 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931444944823 0.071462118173 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948620025063 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077844566645 0.0609392437508 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 12.6369458128 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.9458128079 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.3980295567 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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