Actions speak louder than words. What is your opinion?

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Actions speak louder than words. What is your opinion?

It is an irrefutable fact that speaking without acting is in vain. It just tires those who have to listen to the same words over and over again without seeing any results from the promises made. Action brings about visible results. This essay will discuss why actions speak louder than words.

One good example is that of our national leaders who are seeking reelection during national elections. Most leaders in my country, for example, are better at speaking rather than acting. Most of their promises and agendas are empty words, such that after their tenure of ruling one cannot still see the impact of their leadership. It is therefore prudent that citizens of their country cease to listen to the ranting of leaders during elections and instead vote for leaders who have demonstrated their initiative for bringing positive change through real efforts like building schools and hospitals.

Secondly, to prove that actions speak louder than words is the case of abandoning bad habits. For instance, running late to meetings, or being abusive. Naturally, it is a tall order to leave bad habits and most times, victims of bad habits give empty promises where they are not able to stop acting wrong. In this case, the only way to believe them is to see actual results such as consistent punctuality and seeking professional counseling or rehabilitation for those who have issues to do being violent. This is the only way to believe in one's intentions to change for the better.

In conclusion, actions bring about tangible results while words are void when not backed up by effort. In my opinion, it is best that all humans speak less and act more in all their endeavors. In this way, it will make us more dependable.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 542, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ent. This is the only way to believe in ones intentions to change for the better. ...
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Line 13, column 194, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ss and act more in all their endeavors. In this way, it will make us more dependab...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, secondly, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91467576792 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44857653138 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57337883959 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9323963856 50.4703680194 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183875510851 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711154595995 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108919429788 0.071462118173 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117806626478 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06744188101 0.0609392437508 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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