The advanced medical technology expands human's life . Do you think it is a curse or blessing?
Now in the modern era, technology increases day by day which is good for everyone because it helps to do tough things in simple way. Likewise, medical technology is also increases rapidly and have very beneficial for us. Also, it expands the human life in many ways. I will shed light on these points in further paragraphs before appropriate conclusion.
To begin with, the medical technology helps to save the human life in many different ways. Like in past few decades when the anyone can sick the don't go to doctor they eat medic which there parents said and it also harmful for their health. Nowadays, technology increases and many machine are invented which saves the human life. For instance X-Ray machine, with the help of X-Ray machine people see inside the body and detect the problem.
Moreover, the blessing to advanced medical technology because help to expand the human life. Avoid the bad things like fast food because these causes many diseases which is not good for human. Today, medical technology is so advanced so they have almost all the solution of all the diseases.
To sum up with, i think that, the medical technology helps to save person life and expand the life of the people it is a blessing advancement rather than the curse.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, moreover, so, for instance, i think, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 217.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8202764977 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3427639599 2.71678728327 86% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552995391705 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.520826223 50.4703680194 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1666666667 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344138180379 0.242375264174 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147492087237 0.0925447433944 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13951589957 0.071462118173 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238234749568 0.151781067708 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829589380729 0.0609392437508 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.32886699507 85% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 55.0591133005 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.5 Out of 90
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