being a journalist is one of the most difficult jobs. to what extent do you agree?
recently, the phenomenon of journalists as most difficult job and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate among certain group of individuals. some people assert that journalism is a very tough job to handle as it needs to have skills, while others hold the view that journalism can be easily handled. this essay will discuss despite some significant downsides why journalism is the most difficult job to handle and will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad reasons why journalism could be difficult, but the most preponderant one lies in the fact that journalism is a risk taking job and needs knowledge skills and power to grasp evident information all over the world within the limited time provided by the higher authorities. Moreover, journalists should provide accurate information and should not publish fake articles. To cite an example, According to the Monash University report more journalists have severe pressures to complete their task per day which lead them to stress a lot in their daily life. Hence, journalism is the most diffcult jobs in this world.
On the other side, there are plethora of reasons for journalism to be an easy job, but the most conspicuous one lies in the fact that some journalist enjoy travelling around the world and provide informations accordingly to the media. Furthermore, these people develop interpersonal skills, knowledge and has the potential to face the consequences.As a tangible example, according to recent survey by the Oxford university more people are opting for journalism as their profession.Therefore, journalism can also be an easy profession to choose.
In recapitulation, this essay discussed journalism as the most difficult job. In my opinion, journalism is actually a difficult job, but if we have the skills we take any job easily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23310810811 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10254900917 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547297297297 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.5573620575 50.4703680194 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.818181818 104.977214359 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.9669160288 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 7.25397266985 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158685447877 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739913267018 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421314043676 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107610735438 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016273986232 0.0609392437508 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 12.6369458128 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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