Can money bring happiness? What are the factors for happiness?
Recently, the phenomenon of effects of wealth on happiness and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of being wealthy is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded truly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that being well-off can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, a peaceful mind can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that having a high financial status, as well as increased quality of life, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered well-being levels’ relation to monetary status. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both having a surplus of income and increased health due to wealth apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of personal happiness, a more simplistic way of living might increase the consequences of being satisfied. Moreover, fundamental aspects of minimalistic life style relate to this reality that the demerits of saddening events pertain to money related occurrences. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of being in deficit of money is correlated negatively with inability to enjoy life. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of wealth affecting happiness.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of having money far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of being prosperous prove the significance of overall satisfaction in life, but also pinpoint basic life necessities implications.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 204, Rule ID: PROVE_PROOF[2]
Message: Did you mean 'proof' (noun) instead of prove (verb)?
Suggestion: proof
...y do the advantages of being prosperous prove the significance of overall satisfactio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18458500164 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9868211351 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0840883603435 0.242375264174 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0288909741348 0.0925447433944 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309998962747 0.071462118173 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0468603506177 0.151781067708 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196276356093 0.0609392437508 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 12.6369458128 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 53.1260098522 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.7 8.32886699507 128% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 55.0591133005 191% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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