Certain kinds of music promote learning in life. Agree or disagree.
Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A typical day reveals music has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussions. People used to analyze and explain how music increase the skill and promote learning in life. I m totally agree with this viewpoint and I will discuss about this in the next paragraphs.
Firstly, music is a beautiful thing the singer who is singing or a writer who are writing music they are describing their feeling. Moreover they are describing their whole life in their song. After that music entertain us in our every feeling like happiness, sadness and in romantic feeling. The listener who are lasting the song they feel their life when they are listening the song. On the next step they also remember that situation they faced in past while listening music. If it is romantic song then they feel that situation. And if it was an action song they remember it. Moreover if it’s sad song so boys feel about their breakup.
Furthermore, music also improves the concentration in everything also in work and during driving. Moreover it increases the learning ability of the people. After that it also used by doctors for fresh patients mind during operation or for reeky treatment. It also makes us aware about music. For example in USA 60% of doctors use the music to do treatment and patients are satisfied and happy with this theory.
To conclude, I think that music is good preference of people. They can do their work properly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 20.9802955665 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80827067669 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52648641117 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541353383459 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 400.5 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2085411064 50.4703680194 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.3157894737 104.977214359 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.9669160288 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52631578947 7.25397266985 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168394161432 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543537306819 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606799611446 0.071462118173 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100820771718 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506961898926 0.0609392437508 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 12.6369458128 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.1260098522 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 11.5310837438 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 60.5 Out of 90
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