The idea of space travel is fantastic these days and scientists are very fascinated towards it. However, there are many environmental problems in our planets that we should resolve first before considering space travel that would cost a significant sum. what is your opinion? support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience.
Now days scientists invent lots of things like mobile phone laptop and other these types of things .In historical period, people do not think good about scientist .But know scientist do lots of things one that is space traveling they make space crafts and also choose the people who can become astronaut .The idea of space travelling is fantastic these days and scientists are very fascinated about this project. However there is lots of environment problem in our planet .So we should first resolve these problems. I will discuss both views.
Firstly, in previous time space travelling is only a dream but nowadays scientists have invented space traveling that is proven to be very beneficial for the mankind. Moreover masses getting aware of life sustainability in other planet. And also see the beauty of space. After that we can also bring the useable things from space like natural resource and things that non-renewable in world.
Secondly, space traveling is very good thing but advantages out ways its disadvantages we should resolve environment problem first before considering space travel. Moreover government also should resolve the basic society problem like unemployment and poverty. After that second main reason is scientists take risk of their astronauts’ .And also have costly damage of space craft’s. Because 50% of space craft’s got damage when they are coming back to their country. For example India’s first astronaut never came back her name is kalpna chawla when she coming back to pavilion her space craft burn out and blast.
To conclusion. We should first consider our economy then we should do these types of work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23134328358 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65694699653 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578358208955 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.271427489 50.4703680194 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.846153846 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.33497536946 281% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429962962462 0.242375264174 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132337283071 0.0925447433944 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1193604285 0.071462118173 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256201605798 0.151781067708 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499625962842 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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