The claim that animals have "rights" has been subject of much debate since the 1970s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned? Do you agree or disagree?
In this contemporary era, zoos play a vital role in preserving wild nature and educate further generations to know about various species. While some people believe that animals in zoos are suffering, others keep up that they are under safe and protected zone. Even though it is a matter of discussion, I tend to believe that zoos should not be banned.
To start with, birds and animals are secured and safe to spend their life in the zoo as zookeepers help to feed animals and birds at regular intervals to protect their health and hygiene. For example, a recent survey conducted on the National zoo revealed that the health of the animals and birds are increased by two percent. Apparently, the zoo help animals, plants, and birds to live and protect them from dangerous sources.
Secondly, As most of the animals are going extinct due to the environment and lack of food, zoos protect animals going in an extinct zone. this help scientists to do research and balance the life cycle of nature. For instance, recent survey revealed that tigers are saved from going extinct by monitoring them in zoos by providing food and proper environment. Hence it is evident why the zoos are not supposed to be banned.
In the view of arguments outlined above, the advantages of zoo are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, hence, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1081.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78318584071 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48413006604 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553097345133 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8828026018 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2727272727 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24064603706 0.242375264174 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093904153349 0.0925447433944 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330743671344 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13489294612 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431444648484 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.5 Out of 90
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