The claim that animals have rights has been the subject of much debate since the 1970s. are zoos helping or hurting animals? Should zoos be banned? Do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that zoos are helping animals, while others believe that zoos are hurting animals and should be banned. As far as my idea concerns, I firmly believe that zoos are helping animals.
From a social point of view, domestic animals are indeed bound to wild animals, which means it might lead to both heated debates and kepping them in captivity. For instance, a group of reputable scientists, working at a prestigious university, conducted a longitudinal study to understand the relationship between behaving differently, preventing from extinction and breeding patterns. Therefore, this evidence thus far support the contention that poachers is correlated with not only extinction of animals but also helping them.
Moreover, in political terms, wildlife is undoubtedly attributable to natural habitants, in that it would lead to natural disasters and children amusement as well as zoos. A well-known example of such attribution is national parks, which is cause for concern since it have been mistaken in taking freedom for granted. Had chained animals in advance, it might have had the opportunity to make them survived. Thus, keeping them could play a significant role in thier lifespawn.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that sth must be taken into consideration. However, as every garden may have some weeds, local authorities are recommended to enforce some strict legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43362831858 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98929093376 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659292035398 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7908667231 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.636363636 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.25397266985 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208551846612 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705109116301 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806694242949 0.071462118173 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208551846612 0.151781067708 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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