Computer and it's advantages

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Computer and it's advantages

It is undeniable that humanity created several inventions in recent decades but the most stupendous one is computer. The computer has significant beneficial implications in human lifestyle. The use of computer benefited humans in almost all aspects of their life and made life so comfortable that our ancestors never imagined. The essay will further elaborate the computer’s contributions across different sectors along with explanations and thus deduce the dialectic conclusion.
At the outset, myriad conspicuous reasons can be brought to elaborate that how computer transform medieval era into modern age. The preponderant explanation lies in the fact that computer brought a revolution in industrial sector. Computer programming enables the industry to produce the products on high scale with less dependence on physical labour. Computer is a multitask operating machine which can handle different jobs with accuracy at the same time, which is beyond human capability.
Another key justification upholding the notion is that extensive use of computer in educational sector provide enormous merits to both students and teachers. Computer made it possible for students to access study material online 24 hours a day and can get guidance and can submit their assignments online with the help of computer. Visual communication is now being conducted through computer with internet facility. The ubiquity of internet and computer are fundamental tools to made the world global village.
Precisely analysing the facts, I would like to recapitulate computer advantages apparently outweigh some of its limitations which can be addressed strategically.

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Average: 8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s which can be addressed strategically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, if, so, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74796747967 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08874618001 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658536585366 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5172373446 50.4703680194 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.769230769 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 7.25397266985 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309217998385 0.242375264174 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976817642377 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452975772308 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16385516642 0.151781067708 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152767903124 0.0609392437508 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 53.1260098522 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 10.9458128079 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 11.5310837438 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 55.0591133005 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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