Over the past few decades, there has been a high degree of the ambivalence over this matter, whether the extreme sports should be banned. This has elicited a stimulated disputation among the public. Whereas some people say that extreme sports should be banned, I sanguinely believe that they should not be banned. This essay will further discuss reasons to support this notion and then deduce a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriads of reasons to support this notion, but one of the most compelling reason is that extreme sports like skiing, bungee jumping, rafting, and diving makes the participants strong and also reduces the mental stress. This helps the people in their personal life as well.
On the contrary, there are some skeptics who conjecture that extreme sports are dangerous and should be banned. They quote multiple examples where the people died while performing those sports. Although it seems ostensibly veridical this is not the case, as post investigation showed that those people were not professionally trained.
After analyzing the above facts, I would like to recapitulate that even though the extreme sports are dangerous, but when performed with proper training are beneficial for the people's mental health. Hence, extreme sports should not be banned.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, well, whereas, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 31.9359605911 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 207.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29468599034 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51507624781 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613526570048 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6302322376 50.4703680194 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6363636364 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126233677834 0.242375264174 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463137691593 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464078514904 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813063165378 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320202617991 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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