Design of buildings have positive or negative impact on people’s life and work?
Number of skyscraper defines the richness of the country. In this modern era, tall buildings are seen mostly in all capitals of the countries. Designing these buildings is an art which have impact on its viewers. In this essay, I will share my point of view by providing positive impacts of high-rise building.
Tourism is the industry which needs new ideas; architectures have tough competition to make the beautiful buildings to attract the people. People enjoy sighting these large building, monuments which give them opportunity to make and share these memories with their love ones. For instance, it is sure that tourists have lot of memories with Eiffel tower and also according to a study done by Department of Tourism of University of Texas revealed that tourist spent a lot of time at skyscraper and big malls. Hence, making these skyscrapers beautiful is the responsibility of designer so that it put positive impact on it viewer.
Similarly, offices of various companies are built in spacious buildings whose design has positive energy on their employees. Companies also use these building for advertisement purpose. For example, a survey in early 21st century showed that advertisements are successful which are made on the ideas where lot of emotion of people are attached; the viewers of the ad where Pisa tower is shown, forced to imagine their trip. Therefore, this illustrates that there is an impact of building on people’s life.
In a nutshell, human beings feel impact of the design of monuments in their life. The essay discussed the positive feeling when people watch and spent time in those buildings whose design is marvelous.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, similarly, so, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15129151292 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77728660693 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568265682657 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2210611238 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7142857143 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342316106695 0.242375264174 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12287392834 0.0925447433944 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990910714708 0.071462118173 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216785223697 0.151781067708 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540961250783 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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