Discuss the pros and cons of extreme sports.
Numerous of individuals think that extreme sports are a good way to express themselves more while others believe otherwise. The opponents claim that it is an activity that is unsafe for many. While it is true that adventure sports can be an outlet for emotions it is also a means to cause injury to people into it. This essay will discuss my justifications for the stated reason.
To begin with, the advantages of doing extreme activities are plenty. First, people will be able to revitalize their energy. They can freely express their feelings after experiencing the intense energy required in these routines. Moreover, they can develop better perspective in life because of the experience they have in extreme sports. To illustrate, bungee jumping and sky diving are both an amazing experience to adventurous persons as they may able to feel extreme happiness and satisfaction during execution. Hence, it is clear that it help them easily share their emotions and improve their personality.
On the other hand, individuals who are involved in dangerous sports are most likely to be injured. Only a single mistake committed during the event will cause mishaps. For example, drag racing and water rafting are unsafe activities to accomplished which have high tendency for human failure and would eventually lead to injury and worse as death. Thus, risky sports must be done only by professionals because of the high tendency for accidents.
To recapitulate, adventure sports are only for high-spirited individuals who are looking for a challenge and development on themselves. However, it may also lead them to disability. Indeed, careful actions must be taken into account to avoid any untoward incidents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...orts. To illustrate, bungee jumping and sky diving are both an amazing experience to adven...
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Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...uld eventually lead to injury and worse as death. Thus, risky sports must be done ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82160261595 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585454545455 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7008806447 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7647058824 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1764705882 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0787209183209 0.242375264174 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0252458184258 0.0925447433944 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04197441882 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0412469825597 0.151781067708 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042795173488 0.0609392437508 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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