discuss various ways of communication availible now and 10 years earlier

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discuss various ways of communication availible now and 10 years earlier.

In tech-savvy era, number of modifications is taken place, which provides lots of new invention to human being. The one of the main advancement is ease in communication. In bygone era, communication is very difficult process but today it become very fragile. I will discuss about communication in past and present era in forthcoming paragraphs.

To embark with, there is lot of difference between nowadays communication and old system of it. First and foremost is that previously letters and postcards were used as means of transferring ideas and to communicate with each other, which are replaced with the help of internet. Public starts to use mobile phone as well as other applications such as facebook, telegram etcetera. Furthermore, people travel a lot to reach destination so that can meet with their relatives. In contrast, now through videoconferencing masses can see others and meet them easily.

The another conducive idea in my mind is that in past public used pigeon as messenger as it carry message to particular place and act as postman. However, now it’s place is occupied by electronic mails through sending of messages are so easy, cheap, and time saving. Lastly, with development of communication facilities life become so easier and modernized that nobody could assume this thing.

To conclude, communication is play crucial role in life of person that in future nobody can think their life without internet and easy communication. But, these facilities should be enjoyed up to limited way to limit the other problems in life.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
... is taken place, which provides lots of new invention to human being. The one of the main adv...
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Line 1, column 239, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
... is very difficult process but today it become very fragile. I will discuss about comm...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, so, well, in contrast, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22709163347 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05568079551 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645418326693 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4065669722 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7142857143 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11041078014 0.242375264174 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359131020192 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336950380639 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.061272917711 0.151781067708 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110116829024 0.0609392437508 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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