Do government should invest money on constructing road around the city for private vehcile or implement better public transport facility?
Government should spend the money on constructing the road for private vehicle is important. But, invest money for better public transport is also important. I will shed light on these views with my opinion in upcoming paragraphs with appropriate conclusion.
To initiate with, to spend the money on roads is very important and beneficial for people. Nowadays, the plays a vital role in human society, it is very precious for people. So to build the new roads is good for individuals because when the person reach the destination where he want to go in less time it is good. Also, the time was save for to do another activities. Furthermore, there are more many benefits to spend the money on roads like it increase the beauty of city.
Nonetheless, to invest the money on public transport is also good idea because it is easy for those people who are not rich or those who cannot buy our own transport for going one place to another. Moreover to spend the money on public transport it is benefits for the country development because when the tourists come they likely to go in public transport so the it help to increase country economy also.
To recapitulate, I opine that to invest the money on both categories is good for government as well it is the beneficial for people.
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| 2019-02-08 | Rohit mahajan | 53 | view |
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, moreover, nonetheless, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65664784602 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528888888889 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 339.3 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9402175924 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5454545455 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348097268749 0.242375264174 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148238825495 0.0925447433944 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111724894106 0.071462118173 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223940620667 0.151781067708 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721800151503 0.0609392437508 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.32886699507 88% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 55.0591133005 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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