Do you think consumer should avoid over packed products or it is responsibility of producer to avoid extra packaging of products?" Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience.
Nowadays packaging of products also plays a major role in sales and marketting of products. But product are being over packaged in the name of sales or safety of the the product being packed. This essay shall discuss who should take the responsibility to avoid the over packaged products and provide arguments from consumer as well as producer’s point of view.
Firstly, producer seems to be more responsible to avoid over packaging as he is producing the product. Being the producer he knows the exact packaging requirements for the product, for instance, what measures should be taken while transportation or while storing the product in warehouse or shop. By researching, a producer may optimally package his product to avoid over packaging and at the same time ensuring safety of the product.
Secondly, consumer is also responsible for overpackaging upto some extent, as many times it was observed that customer asks for extra packaging of the product. A servey conducted by consumer research association in UK revealed that customer more likely buy a well packaged product. If consumer focuses on the quality of product rather than quality of packaging, over packaging can be avoided.
Finally, this essay discussed how producer is responsible for optimal packaging and consumer is responsible for creating a demand for overpackaged product. In my opinion, both consumer and producer should take equal responsiblity to avoid over packaging.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36086956522 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98423393418 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530434782609 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 394.2 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1637559806 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.090909091 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8181818182 7.25397266985 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368018624982 0.242375264174 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176620855721 0.0925447433944 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714874827765 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257831358948 0.151781067708 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490030243361 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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