Do you think that place where the person grew up has an influence on his accomplishments? Explain with example
To achieve success, influence of place where person born and brought up is debatable with skills developed during academic life. Some people believe that skills develop during learning phase of life twist as a success while other people argue that place and rich environment have great influence on individual success. In this essay, I shall discuss and analyze both views of this argument and provide the logical conclusion.
Firstly, there are preponderant and multifarious examples for successful person in this world. While raising parents provide only basic schooling but talent and skills acquire by child is directly connected with success of one's life. For example, Sachin Tendulkar is legend of cricket game. He is very combative and determined for all his effort for achieving success and become legends. In addition, most amazing football player Messi has magic in his legs to score well. This talent comes in very few peoples in spite of their birth place or society.
Secondly, those who argue place has great influence on success of individual are correct view and to some extent it is true. It is believed that opportunity to get ease line or direction to success is directly connected with place. For example, Actor's son/daughter becomes actor in higher ratio. One instance is Amitabh Bachchan who sun becomes actor. There are many profound examples in this world. For these people, they got platform since birth, rest they need to put directive effort only.
In recapitulate, there are many omni-presents example in this world. In my personal view, both notions are provide brief information and have direct influence on success. I would recommend people putting hard work and determine with higher concentration get success and people pursue this thought.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 285.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2350877193 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5532530744 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 139.433497537 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60701754386 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4095253106 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8888888889 104.977214359 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05555555556 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152436222315 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512053973743 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553714728082 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999911292413 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025120228879 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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