Do you think that place where the person grw up has an infulence on his accomplishments? Explain with examples
environment has a big role in our development. As the saying says: who you are is from where you are. I believe that places or environment has a vital influence in everyone's accomplishment. In this essay I will elaborate my points of view about the topic above.
At the outset, there are many ways how people do to achieve their accomplishments in life. For instance, Graham Bell grew up to a city with this family. Being with you families around you during your developmental stage can help you to grow a better person. growing up with your parents beside yu to guide you will help you accomplished your dreams life. if you grow up in a place where people are is respectable and hospitable you will bring it as a culture and tradition. Therefore, places can play a big influence on your achievements.
Nevertheless, if people grow up in a populated and noisy area, this will enherit to his/her mind and body. For example, your environment during your childhood days are not conducive nor friendly, you will follow that instinct and behavior as you go along with your life.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that there are more positive impacts on where you grew up compare to the negative impacts it shows.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Environment
environment has a big role in our development. As t...
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...e can help you to grow a better person. growing up with your parents beside yu to guide...
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Suggestion: If
...help you accomplished your dreams life. if you grow up in a place where people are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 20.9802955665 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 1207.87684729 85% => OK
No of words: 217.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71428571429 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78637648264 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576036866359 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8504836841 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6923076923 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.25397266985 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263039352506 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936793043457 0.0925447433944 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061742317374 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144055306324 0.151781067708 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765389329824 0.0609392437508 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 12.6369458128 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 11.5310837438 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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