Do you think students who go to university should pay full fee than who do not go to university given that graduates earn higher salaries. Agree or disagree.
Recently, the phenomenon of allocating the high wages for employees who graduated from universities in compare with the others who do not have academic degress and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although this decision is beneficial as it regarded by the substantial number of individuals both constructive and positive, others hold opponents views. I am inclined to believe that it can be plus as it could develop brilliant aspects for its adherents.
From a social standpoint, there are several advantages of devoting high salary jobs to educational graduates in comparison of the other job seekers. Thses benefits are rooted in the fact of developing the number of university students in order to create prosperous future for the nation. Firstly, this idea encourage pupils to complete their educational curriculum and this stimulus is quite crucial for developed countries. Furthermore, it is crystal clear that the graduated people tolarate difficult circumstances in order to achieve the academic status and they will expect to get an appropriate occupation with high salary and promotions.
On the one hand, paying high wages to the employees who have a academic degree in comparison of the other ones has some opponents. They argued that this decision affect other jobs which do not need to have a academic degree including shoppers, drivers and the other ones. According to research undertaken by a prestigious university the people who have the jobs with no academic degree have some feel of unsatisfaction. This feeling has some catastrophic effects on societies. Due to this feeling these workers have not sufficient efficiency in their jobs and lead to some confrontations between the employers and employees.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that allocating well-paid jobs to academic graduates has more merits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1207.87684729 134% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42809364548 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03105258687 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551839464883 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 379.143842365 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5395562544 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.846153846 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116022827063 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413845019732 0.0925447433944 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529760764717 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684200812018 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361263300244 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 55.0591133005 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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