Does video communication with doctor help patients to cure any disease? write its pros and cons?

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Does video communication with doctor help patients to cure any disease? write its pros and cons?

Surely there has no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals video communication with doctor has been one of the most prominent topics on the contemporary discussion. People have always been conflicting views regarding this and I will discuss both sides of arguments in further elaborating paragraphs.

To begin with, there are enormous merits of video communication with doctor help patients to cure any disease. Firstly, it is helpful in emergency cases because in sometime people cannot reach at hospital in emergency time so it is beneficial to save unhealthy patients. Secondly, video communication access to experienced about international doctors as well as effective way to save the life of ill patients.

On the other hand, there are some demerits of video communication with doctors. Primarily, doctors may mis-guide them because through video communication doctors cannot understand problem of patients. Moreover, sometime doctors have mis-conception of symptoms in that cases they cannot provide proper care for patients. Furthermore, this technique have create some consequences so it has spread some negative effects of patient health.

In conclusion, video communication with doctors are beneficial for patients but sometime it create some mis- conception so it is the responsibility of doctors they should use this technique in emergency situation not for un normal situation.

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Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61160714286 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13337843666 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584821428571 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9240376735 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.272727273 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7272727273 7.25397266985 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280833529834 0.242375264174 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121135142284 0.0925447433944 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126879275093 0.071462118173 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178310595657 0.151781067708 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073777216951 0.0609392437508 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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