Some people argue that laws changes human behavior, whereas some disagree. Do you agree with it.

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Some people argue that laws changes human behavior, whereas some disagree. Do you agree with it.

Surely there has no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals laws changes human behavior has been one of the most prominent topics on the contemporary discussion. Some people think that laws changes human behavior but others disagree with this argument. In my opinion rules and regulations change behavior of human and I will discuss reasons behind this notion in further elaborating paragraphs.
To begin with, there are myriad of reason which will further explain this argument. Firstly, rules and regulation are helpful for changing behavior of human beings because laws are implemented by government for the welfare of people so they have follow in their daily life. Moreover, masses avoid commit crime because the fear of rules and regulations eventually laws are helpful for controlling crime in society as well as nation.
In addition to it, laws provide the protection to human and aware about rights of their life. Furthermore, government impose different rule in different places as well as different situation so individual should have follow without any restriction. For example, if a person follow traffic rules during driving which they can save their life as any injury or accident.
In conclusion, laws changes human behavior by different prospects because it is beneficial for masses welfare.

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Average: 8.5 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ent situation so individual should have follow without any restriction. For example, i...
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...injury or accident. In conclusion, laws changes human behavior by different pros...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 221.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30769230769 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69380923184 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592760180995 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1821917787 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.636363636 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6363636364 7.25397266985 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254408566921 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110731724283 0.0925447433944 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106687407382 0.071462118173 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160945980227 0.151781067708 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0961286098354 0.0609392437508 158% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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