donkey or man

Essay topics:

donkey or man

donkey is used by humans to carry goods here and there.

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Average: 2.2 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Donkey
donkey is used by humans to carry goods here a...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 10.5418719212 9% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 0.0 20.9802955665 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 31.9359605911 6% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 45.0 1207.87684729 4% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 11.0 242.827586207 5% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.09090909091 5.00649968141 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 1.82116028684 3.92707691288 46% => The fourth root words length is low.
Word Length SD: 1.56405913946 2.71678728327 58% => Word_Length_SD is low.
Unique words: 11.0 139.433497537 8% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 1.0 0.580463131201 172% => OK
syllable_count: 14.4 379.143842365 4% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.57093596059 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6551724138 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 11.0 20.5024630542 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 50.4703680194 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 45.0 104.977214359 43% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.0 20.9669160288 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.0 7.25397266985 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 6.9802955665 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161713780663 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161713780663 0.0925447433944 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.071462118173 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161713780663 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.3 12.6369458128 26% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 53.1260098522 161% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 6.54236453202 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 10.9458128079 37% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.26 11.5310837438 46% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.62 8.32886699507 67% => OK
difficult_words: 1.0 55.0591133005 2% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.94827586207 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.3980295567 62% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.5123152709 57% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.

Rates: 22.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 90
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